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Posted Jul 27, 2015 in Product Description by cloudsarah

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In the future, Gadia Labs has a few major areas wanting to breakthrough. First, let Gadia Power working with VR devices. Gadia Lab think it is just not right to use gamepad to interact with your Oculus Rift or other VR device any more, the controlling device should match the level of stunning sense of presence. Secondly, Gaida Labs believes EMG technology should not limited to gesture control, it could use in the gaming system to bring more level of reality into our gaming experience. Bio-sensing knowledge like muscle sensor can detect more dimension of experience, bringing a more immersive gaming experience.

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Gadia Power believes developing a loving community is crucial to our future. An open source framework will be designed to help developers create their own immersive experience and share it on our community. And we will open raw EMG to every developer to custom gestures which we believe can be very exciting!

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About tech: Electromyography (EMG)measures the electrical activity of muscles at rest and during contraction in response to a nerve’s stimulation of the muscle. This technology has only been available to ...

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commented Jul 27, 2015 by cloudsarah
haha, because it is written by the same person, Could you give me some customized advice on improving my writing skill.
commented Jul 27, 2015 by The Writing Doctor
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