Trip to Thailand 141 words

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Posted Aug 28, 2015 in Student Essay by Jasonlan
We go to the Phuket Island of Thailand we8.10 we back be 8.16 day.1 morning I  go to the Beach and I play at beach noon go to eat some food and I swimming in the swim pool and I and my
Father go to Massage .
Day2
We go to swim in the Hotel beach atther 1day night  we go to Dinner in the hotel restaurant.
Day3 I am sick over day a stay at the hotel . Mom cooked food at the villa.
Day4 I go to the Learn Muay Thai  go to the
6 restaurant.
In the Thai everyone is smile , So they are known as the smiling country, they also believe in all the Buddha.
Thai massage is also very famous, Thailand is very simple really also, Thailand fruit or delicious, kinds of Thai cuisine has a lot of very delicious.
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Bid Aug 28, 2015 by The Writing Doctor
Selected Aug 28, 2015 by Jasonlan
 
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Hi Jason!

Looks like you had a great time in Thailand! :)

I'll fix all the mistakes in your essay and send it back to you. Go ahead and accept my bid! Thanks!

Proposed Price (PCoins) - 141 PCoins ( USD 1.41 / CNY 9.88 )
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Bid Aug 28, 2015 by aten
Edited Aug 28, 2015 by aten

Hello!

I would be happy to proofread this for you. Your adventure sounds great, but I see a number of errors in your writing, mostly with sentence structure and formation. I can edit these for you to help improve the flow and readability of your work.

Thank you for considering my bid.

Proposed Price (PCoins) - 141 PCoins ( USD 1.41 / CNY 9.88 )
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