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Posted Sep 9, 2015 in Web Content by 1894944on
Dear Mr. Zaim,

Thank you for your interesting in our ad services. Let me have a brief introduce of our supermarket media. (Please see the attached file: The Locations on map & the supermarket list).

SuperMa Media Inc has close cooperation with more than 60 Chinese owned supermarket for nearly 75% of overall Chinese owned supermarkets. The total number of visitors amounts to around 195,000 per days in all our cooperated supermarket stores. In different store, there are different advertising items as show on the attached list.

I'm not sure your location, but i think you can choice more, not only Sunny Supermarket.

I also highly recommend to advertising on the back of the shopping receipt. I also attached a demo of this to show you how the ad made. This advertising method can make huge viewers as high as more than 300,000 for your expand your business, and the cost per viewer as low as $0.005,  and the most important thing is almost every advertising receipt will be delivered into every customer's hand.

I hope to make a appointment foe a visit with you, and then I will know more requirement ...
Offer Price - 323 PCoins ( USD 3.23 / CNY 22.67 )
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commented Sep 9, 2015 by 1894944on
The extra payment is for tracking the modify. please keep the original words and write the  modification in different color or write the comment on side on the article. Thank you very much.

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Bid Sep 9, 2015 by Gabi.T
Selected Sep 9, 2015 by 1894944on
 
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Hi,

I notice a number errors in your writing that need to be corrected. I can edit this for you and fix all the errors. I can keep the original text and put comments at the side, just like you asked for.

Thanks.

Proposed Price (PCoins) - 400 PCoins ( USD 4 / CNY 28.08 )
Promised Time - 10 hours
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Bid Sep 9, 2015 by The Writing Doctor

Hi!

This has similar errors to the last assignment. I'll revise it and track the changes as you have requested. Go ahead and accept my bid. Thank you!

Proposed Price (PCoins) - 650 PCoins ( USD 6.5 / CNY 45.66 )
Promised Time - 8 hours
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