A Girl's Personal Statement for Appliy a US High School 383 words

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Posted Apr 20, 2016 in Personal Statement by 大汉风华
I was born in a family which is happy and full of love. Both my parents are high-ranking administer in their company. Their incomes are high above most families in China.  As the only child, they give me love without reservation. They support me everything I want. I like fine arts, especially painting and Chinese calligraphy. So they invited art teachers to teach me painting and calligraphy. They also encouraged me to compete in national calligraphy and painting contests. In return, I have achieved first prize of National Calligraphy Competition.

My mother, a caring women,loves animals very much and adopts several stray animals, like cats and dogs. The occupancy load of our family is limited, but she provides food and water for other stray animals. She often told me, man should not abuse animals because they are  living existence of human equality. Under the taught of her, I’m growing up to be a caring girl. I also love animal and hope to do something for them. I have attended as a volunteer to the Pet Rescue Center for help and organized fund-raising activities.

Except my hobby and volunteer experience. I did pretty well on academic, but not top few in my ...
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Bid Apr 20, 2016 by aten
Selected Apr 20, 2016 by 大汉风华
 
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Hello,

I would be happy to help proofread and make suggestions for your application essay.

Thanks!
Amy

Proposed Price (PCoins) - 500 PCoins ( USD 5 / CNY 35.1 )
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commented Apr 20, 2016 by 大汉风华
Dear Amy,

Could you finish it in 12 hours? My boss just need it 12 hours later.

Thank you so much
commented Apr 20, 2016 by aten
Yes, I will get it to you within 12 hours.  Thanks!
commented Apr 20, 2016 by aten
Hello,  I've uploaded the finished document.  Let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks!
Amy
commented Apr 20, 2016 by 大汉风华
Thank you so much Amy. I'm not good at English writing.
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